Describe your bedroom

As you walk through my door into my bedroom, straight ahead is a massive sliding door which looks out onto the bright green lawn. The plain white walls with the odd framed picture and mirror that hangs between my drawers and the corner of my room surround the most comfortable queen size bed. My duvet is detailed with dark green leaves with a few shades of red in which gives my room more colours. My bed is accompanied by a wooden bedside table with a white draw, in which I keep all my unused and random junk. On top of this bedside table lies a little pot plant with all my perfumes that sit there waiting to be used in the morning. At the end of my bed to the right sits my white plain desk which is placed underneath my window so you can look out to the mountain ranges and to the dry grass on the property over to us. It’s a very spacious room since it has white walls, white wall lights and white curtains which make the room look bigger than it actually is.

Metaphor: a direct comparison between two things which allows the reader to gain insight into one via the shared characteristic(s). 

All the world is a stage and all the men and women were merely players.

Extended metaphor: a comparison between two things which is consistently developed throughout a paragraph or piece of writing. The development comes from a theme of word choices, all centred around one thing/idea. It is used to specifically project an impression or idea upon the reader, which be understood by noticing the shared characteristic(s) of the two things being compared.

Romeo and Juliet’s ship and sea is an extended metaphor.

As the sunlight streams through the grimy glass that protects the delicate buds inside, the frost creeps closer to the door. The only indicator of life inside the greenhouse is the build-up of condensation on the windows. Sliding the entrance open, a draft of warm, humid air embraces me. As I step inside, I see a gardener who welcomes me with a big smile. I look around to see plants which you can see are thriving to grow and become a

As you walk through the door into my bedroom, my foot melts into the soft sand like carpet. The botanic plants surround my room still leaving a spacious, fresh vibe. The dark green, tropical palm leaves scatter around . My bed is accompanied by a wooden bedside table with a white draw, in which I keep all my unused and random junk. On top of this bedside table lies a little pot plant with all my perfumes that sit there waiting to be used in the morning. At the end of my bed to the right sits my white plain desk which is placed underneath my window so you can look out to the mountain ranges and to the dry grass on the property over to us. It’s a very spacious room since it has white walls, white wall lights and white curtains which make the room look bigger than it actually is.

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